A couple sites to check out for those...

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Does anyone feel like looking for typos/grammar errors? I'm plugging away, but am sure that I have missed some stuff.
Click on the body parts, and it will take you to the text that could use a once-over. Thanks!

http://massagefrog.com/what_hurts.html

By the way... the old wives' tale is WRONG! It is web-design that will make you go blind!
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I read all the way through all the backpain areas and no mispellings I could find. You do have a bit of excessive use of commas, but nothing that will hurt much.

I would suggest you take a look at the size and spacing of your characters in the articles and below them also. It's difficult to read as I think because they are so close together. Maybe see if you can add a little extra space between your lines and words.

Also the text below the article areas, such as under the back pain area are so very wide that it's almost too long to get back to the beginning of the next sentence without getting slightly disoriented. Maybe see if you can either narrow that arrow a little or create 2 columns rather than one long one. Also giving the space between lines and words as mentioned above. I think that will help your readers be able to read the areas much more comfortably.

Other than this, very interesting and knowledgeable reading for sure. I learned a bit while reading :) Good Job!
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You're awesome, Jo Ann! Thanks for the fabulous feedback:D
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You're quite welcome. Have fun with it and good luck on it, wish you were in Alabama! :P
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Esther L Miller wrote:
Does anyone feel like looking for typos/grammar errors? I'm plugging away, but am sure that I have missed some stuff.
Click on the body parts, and it will take you to the text that could use a once-over. Thanks!

http://massagefrog.com/what_hurts.html

By the way... the old wives' tale is WRONG! It is web-design that will make you go blind!


Hi Esther
If you click on the forward facing body adbomen, which should be abdomen by the way, I get a 404 error. All the other body parts seem to work OK lol.

The line and word spacing look good to me on Chrome.
Greg

When I stop learning please check for signs of life.
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LOL! Thanks. I can't believe that I typed it into the image mapper that way three times !
I appreciate you keen, Coffee enhanced eyes! Wheeeeee

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